my poem about LOVE;; comments?
Mii AWESOME POEMZZ!!!
Current mood: loveydovey
Category: loveydovey Writing and Poetry
LOVE
Love is when you like him more than anything
When you cannot stop thinking about him no matter how hard you try
When you will do just about anything to be with him
When you hear his name, your heart skips a beat
When nothing is sweeter but than to hear his voice
When he is the reason for all the tears and the pain
but still he is the only one that makes you feel better
Love waits…It comes when you least expect it to come so be patient
Love cannot be explained in words but when it comes you will know its there.
Rahila
what do you think?? it was just for a project thingy but it came out kinda nice i think….btw im 14
- rahila aKa lila
Tags: Heart Skips A Beat, Poem About Love, Poem Love, Poetry Love, Writing Poetry
October 30th, 2009 at 12:18 pm
aww very cute!
October 31st, 2009 at 8:20 am
love is a bitch
November 2nd, 2009 at 3:12 am
omG that was beautiful it sounds like you are in love with someone ;)!Keep writing.
November 2nd, 2009 at 7:22 am
ohhh i loved it.
November 4th, 2009 at 7:49 am
9/10
if it was about a girl 10/10
November 6th, 2009 at 4:43 pm
Really good.
Really really good.
November 9th, 2009 at 3:53 pm
damn you 14 very good im proud : (
November 12th, 2009 at 12:04 pm
not 2 good but ok
November 13th, 2009 at 3:51 am
really really
wonderful and beautiful
=)
November 13th, 2009 at 4:24 am
awww that so sweet ;]
but you should replace ‘him’ with ‘them’ so it seems like its from anyones point of view. Boys & Girls
November 16th, 2009 at 4:37 am
i like it.. =)
btw i’m 14 too..
November 19th, 2009 at 10:06 am
love at 14? Slow down honey. You have your whole life to fall in love. Your on the right track with your poem though. Keep up the good work
November 19th, 2009 at 4:08 pm
Well you’re making love sound like it can only be a romantic thing between a guy and a girl….that’s not all love is; but it’s nicley written.
November 19th, 2009 at 4:14 pm
that was really great i think you are a really good writer.it would be really nice if you emailed that to me
November 20th, 2009 at 6:13 am
Absolutely adorable. Its totally true, I feel the same way about that certain someone. But, I like it when a poem rhymes. Thats the advice i can give you.