;Writing Poetry
Criticism on my poem and advice on if I should take a career in writing poetry?
Letting go
Love is hard to leave
Letting go is harder than seems
A sweet gentle is all you might miss
But to someone else it’s heavenly bliss
Letting go doesn’t mean to stop loving
It means to stop hurting
Forgetting is hard to do
A kiss can’t be forgotten
A touch is easy to miss
To love and forget is highly impossible
Letting go doesn’t mean to forget the memories
It means to stop letting them haunt you
There was some spelling mistakes this should be better: Letting go
Love is hard to leave
Letting go is harder than it seems
A sweet gentle touch is all you might miss
But to someone else it’s heavenly bliss
Letting go doesn’t mean to stop loving
It means to stop hurting
Forgetting is hard to do
A kiss can’t be forgotten
A touch is easy to miss
To love and forget is highly impossible
Letting go doesn’t mean to forget the memories
It means to stop letting them haunt you
- bmsogirl
my poem about LOVE;; comments?
Mii AWESOME POEMZZ!!!
Current mood: loveydovey
Category: loveydovey Writing and Poetry
LOVE
Love is when you like him more than anything
When you cannot stop thinking about him no matter how hard you try
When you will do just about anything to be with him
When you hear his name, your heart skips a beat
When nothing is sweeter but than to hear his voice
When he is the reason for all the tears and the pain
but still he is the only one that makes you feel better
Love waits…It comes when you least expect it to come so be patient
Love cannot be explained in words but when it comes you will know its there.
Rahila
what do you think?? it was just for a project thingy but it came out kinda nice i think….btw im 14
- rahila aKa lila
SERIOUSLY NEED HELP WITH A LOVE POEM! ITS URGENT?
So.. I love writing poetry.. But for some reason i cant right one that i need.. that makes since.. its about the first time he told me he loved me.. if you need to ask me anything just ask.. please someone just write a really good poem.. this kinda means a lot to us..
thanks much!
GOD BLESS!!
- Chandace M