Will you please rate my poem on a scale of 9-34?
The heart so full of love!
Trash
collecting, see, personified by being
full of love
the aimless descriptor love
love love my poetry to be full of good
things, like flowers and sunsets over the sea!
Will you be telling me
of these wonderful events,
so I can BE THERE,
yeah,
who put you here?
We can go for a picnic among
the swaying oak branches
in tall grass or snowbanks,
whichever makes you aware
of where you
are
do you see the beauty of color?
Of course you do,
silly.
- Buk
Tags: Beauty, Flowers, Love Poetry, Tall Grass, Trash
November 19th, 2009 at 5:05 pm
It’s a 34. I love, love, love the beauty of flowers and sunsets but it’s freaking 12 degrees outside right now.
November 20th, 2009 at 5:02 am
Yeah, it’s a strange word, isn’t it – love – it means so many things and nothing. Is it a sum of its parts or are there always a number of different parts vying for inclusion in the definition? If so, there’ll never be a definition, a definitive explanation of what love is. What each person has been led to believe is the concept of love will be different – so, does “love” really exist … have we been TAUGHT that it exists … or do we just WANT it (as a concept) to exist?
November 23rd, 2009 at 4:31 am
33–in poetry there is always room for more or improvement.
Nice write.
November 25th, 2009 at 12:40 am
I want to tickle giggles, I mean, I would like to second what giggles said.
I don’t have any scales, of my own, at the moment; the ATF confiscated my triple beams.
November 25th, 2009 at 8:39 am
this is truly wonderful.loved it…well i’m giving u 32 points…use of imagery in poems relating to nature is a must…it could have been much better n one could be able to conjure up the scene..
wishing you luck n looking foward for some wonderful work..
November 27th, 2009 at 11:14 am
Hey you loving bastardo
I wrote a LOVE poem like
that this morning, but I
lost it or just simply
forgot to write it down
or something.
November 30th, 2009 at 5:14 am
The gig is up…I knew you were a writer for the TV show “S*x in the City”
oh , I rate it a…..(gasing with a coughing fit)……
December 2nd, 2009 at 4:00 am
A piece of writing is never done, so I’ll go with Giggles 33.
December 3rd, 2009 at 7:54 pm
34 for being full of sarcasim…and stuff.
ma
December 5th, 2009 at 7:30 am
I give you 34.75 because you probably look better than me in a swimsuit or a jacket….or something
December 8th, 2009 at 1:56 pm
A 34 because of the second stanza.
December 11th, 2009 at 8:43 am
I give it a 29. You can dance to it.